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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Snowblind, numbed by frost

on this silent plain. Raw sense of pain

and fear now all I have to trust in

Honeygloom's avatar

Pain and fear are very reliable. Love the forlorn tone to this🖤

MS Rivera's avatar

A tender white globe

Touched by invisible fire

Turns red, painful, raw

Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool imagery! The eye for me can almost mirror the Earth and climate change, I really like it🖤

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

You bear blind witness

To ultraviolent acts:

A black hole baked whole

Honeygloom's avatar

Very clever! Love this🖤

MS Rivera's avatar

Love the play on words!

Tess McCarthy's avatar

Synesthesia sets in again

Looking at you is like a slap in the face

You dull all my senses really

Honeygloom's avatar

Such a cool take! I love it!! And welcome!

Tess McCarthy's avatar

WHOOPS on so many levels here but my cherry is officially popped.

erniet's avatar

Yes. It's happened to me.😁

Desert summer sun

Grills flesh and fabric and wood

Even eyes are burnt.

K.M. Bennett's avatar

With one look at those

incandescent beings, your

senses fade to black

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh very cool take! I love it🖤

Richbee's avatar

Plain and simple, Foster Grants worn

UV protected, polarized shades cool;

Ray-Bans prevent racing sun’s burn-out.

Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Excellent advice🖤

Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Long travel's costly

The ferryman takes silver

The sun's coin is dark

Honeygloom's avatar

Whoo, love this🖤

David Perlmutter's avatar

I have to think Cyclops from the X Men suffers from this every time he uses his powers.

Honeygloom's avatar

I think about this too. How does he do that without frying his own face off?

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

The Sun never sets,

Till it's sure, it's done its best,

To leave someone sore... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Such a meanie beanie😣😂

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Haha! He'd burn us all, if he had the chance... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Going to in 500 million years or something.

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

That will definitely ruin everyone's day, even worse than photokeratitis... 😎