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Snowblind, numbed by frost

on this silent plain. Raw sense of pain

and fear now all I have to trust in

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Pain and fear are very reliable. Love the forlorn tone to this🖤

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A tender white globe

Touched by invisible fire

Turns red, painful, raw

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Very cool imagery! The eye for me can almost mirror the Earth and climate change, I really like it🖤

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You bear blind witness

To ultraviolent acts:

A black hole baked whole

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Very clever! Love this🖤

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Love the play on words!

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Synesthesia sets in again

Looking at you is like a slap in the face

You dull all my senses really

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Such a cool take! I love it!! And welcome!

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WHOOPS on so many levels here but my cherry is officially popped.

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Jul 24Liked by Honeygloom

Yes. It's happened to me.😁

Desert summer sun

Grills flesh and fabric and wood

Even eyes are burnt.

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😬 Ouch.

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With one look at those

incandescent beings, your

senses fade to black

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Oh very cool take! I love it🖤

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Plain and simple, Foster Grants worn

UV protected, polarized shades cool;

Ray-Bans prevent racing sun’s burn-out.

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Ha! Excellent advice🖤

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Jul 24·edited Jul 24Liked by Honeygloom

Long travel's costly

The ferryman takes silver

The sun's coin is dark

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Whoo, love this🖤

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I have to think Cyclops from the X Men suffers from this every time he uses his powers.

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I think about this too. How does he do that without frying his own face off?

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The Sun never sets,

Till it's sure, it's done its best,

To leave someone sore... 😎

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Such a meanie beanie😣😂

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Haha! He'd burn us all, if he had the chance... 😎

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Going to in 500 million years or something.

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That will definitely ruin everyone's day, even worse than photokeratitis... 😎

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