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Caro Henry's avatar

Silent sentinels

Shed sound-deadening fascicles

I gather tinder

Honeygloom's avatar

I love this! Alliteration is my favorite. Plus the ssss just gives that secret, suspicious tone to the poem. 🖤

Iris Shaw's avatar

Wind roars through branches,

Under heavy myrrh-hung boughs -

No one hears my scream.

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Dec 28, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

That’s beautiful ☺️