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A.P. Murphy's avatar

I went out fighting

but Valkyries passed me by.

No Valhalla for me

though I lie embraced

with sword in my adversary's guts.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah you’d make it, Odin loved a good poet🖤

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

How do you choose which

Of us is deserving when

We were made to fight?

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Honeygloom's avatar

Curiously enough, being a good poet was a crucial part of being a worthy warrior in Old Norse culture. You can fight, but can you verse?

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

You can fight, but can you verse?

Is there a meter to your curse?

You may cut as man of action

But do you thrust with lethal scansion?

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Honeygloom's avatar

You are definitely getting into Valhalla with that one😎

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

'Xactly, it's all about who you know, not who you kill

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David Perlmutter's avatar

They play a prominent role in Richard Wagner's Ring Cycle, inspiring one of its most famous instrumental parts.

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Honeygloom's avatar

And the Ring Cycle was inspired by the Saga of the Volsungs, which is a fantastic read.

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

It was written to please King Ludwig II of Bavaria (Germany hadn't formed yet) who was keen on the old legends.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Wagner’s Ring Cycle was? I didn’t know that, that’s cool!

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

I lived in Germany a couple years and got the story first hand, touring Bavaria.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool, I’d love to visit Germany.

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

It was quite an experience, even though my Deutsch isn’t too good (I know how to order food and get a room in a hotel).

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Wings of twilight dark,

A warrior's call echoes—

Silent skies tremble.

Valkyrie descends,

Whispers of fallen heroes,

Midnight wind carries.

In frost and fire,

Battle's breath and shadow's sigh,

She reaps silent souls.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Amazing! I think the third is my fave, that middle line is so beautiful🖤

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

Ride the wind, maiden

Raise your sword in battle fierce

None will stay your path

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Honeygloom's avatar

Awesome imagery, I can feel this🖤

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Valiant slain warrior woman and men

Lift heads up to the stars

Valhalla’s bar is now open for business.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah, Heiðrún, well researched🖤

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erniet's avatar

Chooser of the slain,

The cold wind blows over me.

Valhalla awaits.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah very nice! I love the middle line, what a great detail🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Odin's attendants,

Light the way to Valhalla,

Guiding the brave home... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Well done! Such an epic feel and great imagery🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it... 😎

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erniet's avatar

Awesome topic!

https://youtu.be/1TIJwKk1Yt0?feature=shared

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! I get it now!

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