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erniet's avatar

Insert the blade just

Below the navel, edge up.

Push the blade upwards

Honeygloom's avatar

Very technical, and the mental image left me with goosebumps.🖤

erniet's avatar

Practice makes perfect…😉

Daniel Baldwin's avatar

‘Shame does not make one

Open oneself,’ she thought, soak’d

In red. ‘It’s honor.’

Honeygloom's avatar

I’m getting Viking vibes from this one. I love it.

C. Elyse's avatar

Please do not complain

The pain will subside very soon

And... stop... talking... shit

Honeygloom's avatar

Wow, this has a lot of emotion packed into it. Very nicely done!

C. Elyse's avatar

I know a few people that I’d like to disembowel by placing my foot as far up their asses as possible.... sorry to rant, yet appreciate the prompt!

Honeygloom's avatar

Rants are always welcome! I view poetry as a kind of therapy, honestly, so vent when needed.🖤

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Honeygloom's avatar

Medieval, I love it.