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Miles MacNaughton's avatar

Hanging from the arch,

The belly's swellings dumped out

In sodden mud pools

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Honeygloom's avatar

Medieval, I love it.

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erniet's avatar

Insert the blade just

Below the navel, edge up.

Push the blade upwards

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very technical, and the mental image left me with goosebumps.🖤

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erniet's avatar

Practice makes perfect…😉

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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

‘Shame does not make one

Open oneself,’ she thought, soak’d

In red. ‘It’s honor.’

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Honeygloom's avatar

I’m getting Viking vibes from this one. I love it.

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C. Elyse's avatar

Please do not complain

The pain will subside very soon

And... stop... talking... shit

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Honeygloom's avatar

Wow, this has a lot of emotion packed into it. Very nicely done!

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C. Elyse's avatar

I know a few people that I’d like to disembowel by placing my foot as far up their asses as possible.... sorry to rant, yet appreciate the prompt!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Rants are always welcome! I view poetry as a kind of therapy, honestly, so vent when needed.🖤

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