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erniet's avatar

Darkest dust, dark cloud,

Where the light rays go to die,

Do evil souls dwell there?

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo interesting take! I think I told you I grew up Mormon? Anyway they believe that evil people float around space for eternity, maybe you’re all on to something🤔

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erniet's avatar

I didn’t know that’s what Mormon’s believe…I was just thinking Hell has to be someplace…😂

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Honeygloom's avatar

I mean outer space isn’t bad. At least it’s interesting 🤷‍♀️

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Looking inside you

Is impossible I’m told

But do you see me?

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ok that’s a freaky thought😬 Some dark monster blob just… peeping on us🖤

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MS Rivera's avatar

Gritty, cloud of dust

Particles, that with a spark

Birth a whole new world

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Honeygloom's avatar

Beautiful imagery🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Very nice! 😎

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Swirls of cosmic dust,

Where stars are formed, and dream of,

Being wished upon... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Aw very nice! Seems very Disney initially, but stars have to die to fall, so pretty dark really🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Absolutely! A bit of light and dark. It's a great combination. Haha... 😎

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Nebulous announcers

Dark dusty space knights,

Storm troopers debris

Left behind comet tails.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Nice! Like a space garbage patch?

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

Screeeeeee as I'm drawn in

My being is now one with yours

Next victim draws near

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Honeygloom's avatar

Yes 🙌 I love this dark, intergalactic squishy thing harvesting🖤

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

Bwahahascreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Draw a discreet veil on what goes on here

not that you can't see what happens in this cosmos

but that you couldn't see and keep your sanity

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love it! Ngl, a lot of the stuff I’ve researched for this month has already tweaked my brain a bit. I think you’re on to something.

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

We cling to the math

even as the nebula

closes, curtain-like

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh that’s beautiful🖤 Wow!

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

I was almost despairing over how good your example one was for this one!! It was fantastic. It's a good prompt.

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Honeygloom's avatar

These have been so fun!

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Cosmic dust clouds view

Can’t find the vacuum. Where’s my…

…microfiber moon?

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Honeygloom's avatar

Have you ever seen Spaceballs? Because this totally made me think of that movie😂

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Surprisingly no.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh wow! You have to see it, it’s so funny.

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Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

Nice.

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Dylan Delgado's avatar

A cosmic ink blot

causes us to scratch our heads.

What wonders hide there?

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Ika Wright's avatar

I love the last phrase of your haiku Honeygloom. A very interesting prompt too.

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