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erniet's avatar

Darkest dust, dark cloud,

Where the light rays go to die,

Do evil souls dwell there?

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo interesting take! I think I told you I grew up Mormon? Anyway they believe that evil people float around space for eternity, maybe you’re all on to something🤔

erniet's avatar

I didn’t know that’s what Mormon’s believe…I was just thinking Hell has to be someplace…😂

Honeygloom's avatar

I mean outer space isn’t bad. At least it’s interesting 🤷‍♀️

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Looking inside you

Is impossible I’m told

But do you see me?

Honeygloom's avatar

Ok that’s a freaky thought😬 Some dark monster blob just… peeping on us🖤

MS Rivera's avatar

Gritty, cloud of dust

Particles, that with a spark

Birth a whole new world

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Swirls of cosmic dust,

Where stars are formed, and dream of,

Being wished upon... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Aw very nice! Seems very Disney initially, but stars have to die to fall, so pretty dark really🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Absolutely! A bit of light and dark. It's a great combination. Haha... 😎

Richbee's avatar

Nebulous announcers

Dark dusty space knights,

Storm troopers debris

Left behind comet tails.

Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Nice! Like a space garbage patch?

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Draw a discreet veil on what goes on here

not that you can't see what happens in this cosmos

but that you couldn't see and keep your sanity

Honeygloom's avatar

I love it! Ngl, a lot of the stuff I’ve researched for this month has already tweaked my brain a bit. I think you’re on to something.

K.M. Bennett's avatar

We cling to the math

even as the nebula

closes, curtain-like

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh that’s beautiful🖤 Wow!

K.M. Bennett's avatar

I was almost despairing over how good your example one was for this one!! It was fantastic. It's a good prompt.

Honeygloom's avatar

These have been so fun!

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Cosmic dust clouds view

Can’t find the vacuum. Where’s my…

…microfiber moon?

Honeygloom's avatar

Have you ever seen Spaceballs? Because this totally made me think of that movie😂

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Surprisingly no.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh wow! You have to see it, it’s so funny.

Dylan Delgado's avatar

A cosmic ink blot

causes us to scratch our heads.

What wonders hide there?

Ika Wright's avatar

I love the last phrase of your haiku Honeygloom. A very interesting prompt too.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Yes 🙌 I love this dark, intergalactic squishy thing harvesting🖤