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Honeygloom's avatar

I generally like a good haibun with coffee, this one may have ruined my appetite though. Geez, organ mud? That is very vivid. Nicely done🖤

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Wendy Melvin's avatar

And there are too many syllables in the last line.😑I just noticed.🙄 In my exuberance for subtle mayhem, counting syllables went right into the ditch.

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