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Kent Peterson's avatar

"It's missing something,"

said the wolf to the rabbit

cooking veggie stew.

Honeygloom's avatar

Run, Rabbit, Run! Love this! Very fun.🖤

Harold Ember's avatar

The Black Cauldron book

From the Prydain Chronicles

Is good like the rest

Honeygloom's avatar

One of my favorite books! I love that you worked that in. 🖤

Harold Ember's avatar

Those are one of my favorites.

Daniel Baldwin's avatar

Churn, foul cauldron, churn

Boil and roil and meld until

Nothing named remains

Honeygloom's avatar

I like this a lot. Reading aloud the sounds are a little chaotic like a boiling pot. Then you get to the internal rhyme in the last line and it all settles, but in a horrific way. Very cool.

C. Elyse's avatar

Intoxicate me

Was the minions feeble plea

Poof smoke wish no more

Honeygloom's avatar

Wicked😈 love it.

erniet's avatar

Pease porridge hot, please

Please don't serve it nine days old

The bones lose their crunch

Honeygloom's avatar

Very gruesome, soggy bones. I love it!

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Oct 26, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

This is so deliciously vague. I can read it so many ways. Love it 🖤