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A.P. Murphy's avatar

La Llorona mata, mata, mata

La venganza vuela, vuela

La muerte bebe

The weeper kills kills kills

Vengeance soars and soars

Death drinks deep

Honeygloom's avatar

I love that you did this in Spanish and English! The repetition brings so many things to mind I love it! Water flowing, the pain La Llorona is forced to relive over and over, so awesome🖤

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Thanks, for this one maybe because of the subject matter I felt it in Spanish first.

erniet's avatar

Hell hath no fury

Like a woman scorned; but why

Must the babes suffer?

Honeygloom's avatar

The million dollar question today… I think it’s because men wrote these tales to remind women that they’ll be punished if they don’t just accept men’s infidelity. Present company excepted of course, men back in the day were a different species, lol.

erniet's avatar

You still hear stories today about women killing their children...it's a horrible thing. The weak are always vulnerable to the wicked...

Honeygloom's avatar

What’s messed up is that about 500 kids a year are killed by their parents (US). Like 57% by fathers and 43% by mothers. Crazy.

erniet's avatar

Wow, that high! 😬

Honeygloom's avatar

Yeah it’s so depressing.

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Butchering The Knack...

I’m a little pretty one

My, my llorona

Honeygloom's avatar

Possibly on of the most disturbing songs ever😅 Butchering is warranted😂

Richbee's avatar

Lost love left her nothing to express

Life gone takes love to extreme.

To scream dissatisfaction on others.

Honeygloom's avatar

Love all the alliteration🖤 Your poems always have such lovely flow.

David Perlmutter's avatar

"Here stands the weeper/No, no I couldn't keep her" (James & Bobby Purify).

Honeygloom's avatar

Weird parallel, but this made me think of the “shrieker” in Brothers Karamozov.

erniet's avatar

La Llorona is a big deal here in New Mexico...

Richbee's avatar

Is this old post May 2 or is it June 2?

Honeygloom's avatar

😅Fixed it. It’s June.

Tiffany S.'s avatar

Every one of them

Had enough of your likeness,

To earn, one ending.

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is tragic and beautiful, really well done🖤

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Honeygloom's avatar

It helps to remember that these old stories were written down by men who just wanted to make women look monstrous and irrational… probably to make their own indiscretions seem minor in comparison.