June 23 - Loviatar
Microbe manic rage-rat
Unseen , a dark night
Flees the probe and ‘scope light
To seek revenge—humanity’s fate
Equalizing population a fixed date
Death-cancer consumes itself to no end.
“Microbe maniac rage-rat” is a phenomenal description, well done!🖤
This is not my will
Do not kill the messenger
Your pain is well earned.
Oh I love this! Not so subtle reminder to behave🖤
Light banished dark nine
But last son, wily of tongue,
duped the left behind.
This so good! The internal rhyme in the middle line and the rhymes in the first and third… I love it!🖤
Thanks so very much!
This is quite an interesting myth. Good haiku Honeygloom, you focused on the topped up misery bought about by this goddess.
She’s a terrifying one, definitely! And thank you 🙏
Nine born, nine plagues
To loose upon us, mother.
Did you see what birth unleashed?
Better to unsee those children.
Ooo interesting, maybe her blindness was so she didn’t have to be complicit. Very cool take🖤
Love this! Never let her get you down!
Microbe manic rage-rat
Unseen , a dark night
Flees the probe and ‘scope light
To seek revenge—humanity’s fate
Equalizing population a fixed date
Death-cancer consumes itself to no end.
“Microbe maniac rage-rat” is a phenomenal description, well done!🖤
This is not my will
Do not kill the messenger
Your pain is well earned.
Oh I love this! Not so subtle reminder to behave🖤
Light banished dark nine
But last son, wily of tongue,
duped the left behind.
This so good! The internal rhyme in the middle line and the rhymes in the first and third… I love it!🖤
Thanks so very much!
This is quite an interesting myth. Good haiku Honeygloom, you focused on the topped up misery bought about by this goddess.
She’s a terrifying one, definitely! And thank you 🙏
Nine born, nine plagues
To loose upon us, mother.
Did you see what birth unleashed?
Better to unsee those children.
Ooo interesting, maybe her blindness was so she didn’t have to be complicit. Very cool take🖤
Love this! Never let her get you down!