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Honeygloom's avatar

It fits very well, the last line reads either hopeful or sinister to me, which I like.

Also, I used to watch the Monkees on Nickelodeon when I was a kid. Davey really kills those maracas🥰😂

Amos's avatar

Heck yeah, Monkees on Nickelodeon. Remember it well.

David Perlmutter's avatar

"Southern trees bear a strange fruit/Blood on the leaves, and blood at the roots".

camden noir's avatar

This made me want to listen to The Chariot

“Cause if there’s blood on the leaves, then there’s blood on the branches. Blood on the leaves…”

Honeygloom's avatar

You guys with the great music recs today, I appreciate it 😊

Aaron McDonald's avatar

Yin and yang and life

And death and witch, maybe -

Mary’s suspended.

Honeygloom's avatar

Hey, I like what you did there with the last line. Lovely double meaning🖤

Amos's avatar

As someone posted above, my first thought was "Strange Fruit" as well. So I'll keep the music theme going but far, far less seriously (forgive me, no offense meant):

Mary, think you'd go?

Tell me truly, what's been done?

Girl, it's not over.

Hat tip to The Monkees:

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=AMNize7s8nc

Richbee's avatar

An animation swinging

Back and forth

A deep breath

Of fresh air

Kept her there

To see sunrise.

Honeygloom's avatar

I really like the stillness in this🖤

Richbee's avatar

Keeps you hanging in anticipation.

Ika Wright's avatar

Omg, this is serendipity as I once wrote a child like poem of Spooky Mary without even knowing about Mary Webster. Quite similar to your prompt, lovely haiku you wrote. Thank you for the little bits I continually learn from you.

Honeygloom's avatar

Her story is so amazing. She was actually accused of witchcraft again later in life and acquitted then, too.

Ika Wright's avatar

That is quite interesting. Might have to read up on that.

Honeygloom's avatar

Had to look up those lyrics and wow. I’m at work so I’ll listen later but that’s powerful.

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Apr 18, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

A cure for what ails you😌

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Apr 17, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

Awesome, I like the single tear. Like that’s all the fucks she’d give ‘em.