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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

Sister, sister, shame on face

For dastardly deed so foul

Inanna rises

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Honeygloom's avatar

Awesome 👏 Inanna does seems to get off lightly!

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erniet's avatar

The jealous goddess,

Her domain a place of fear.

Tread lightly in Kur.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Well done! Very foreboding tone🖤

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Perched squatting on your soul

I lean my breasts in

so you may suckle

the fresh black milk of your death

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Honeygloom's avatar

Wow! Such a disturbing image! I love it so much🖤💀

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Thanks as always. Hope it isn't too dark, but that's where my writing is right now.

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Honeygloom's avatar

We love it dark around here, not to worry😈

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

kUR. Not our the conscious way!

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Inanna’s cloak stripped, Evening star hung

Our the unconscious way, Ningishzuda god

Horned head,wings, eagle claws, serpent tail

Anzu above Abzu chaos waters below

Renewal two rivers flow by Babylon.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Awesome, I love the scene you’ve set here🖤

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Did some research Sumerian mythology.

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Honeygloom's avatar

It’s fascinating😌

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Research Nagas.

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