January 3 - Chilled
Menthol smoke snaps throat
Arctic liquor stuns numb tongue
I’m stretched out, chilled out
Sounds like a nice state to be in, no matter which way you order the words.
A chill in the air,
Winter storm will freeze the ground.
Hard to bury him.
I always think about that in the olden times, just keeping people in the shed until the ground thaws.
Chilled clear soup is good
when prepared with the old bones
Of one's enemies
Mmmm... delicious haiku. Very nicely done🖤
Or maybe: Arctic liquor stuns tongue numb
Menthol smoke snaps throat
Arctic liquor stuns numb tongue
I’m stretched out, chilled out
Sounds like a nice state to be in, no matter which way you order the words.
A chill in the air,
Winter storm will freeze the ground.
Hard to bury him.
I always think about that in the olden times, just keeping people in the shed until the ground thaws.
Chilled clear soup is good
when prepared with the old bones
Of one's enemies
Mmmm... delicious haiku. Very nicely done🖤
Or maybe: Arctic liquor stuns tongue numb