October 13
I really like yours, it is change on a scale that those affected could not comprehend
Haha, it was kind of a weird idea. Iām glad it worked š
Thank you! And youāre correct, humans naturally clone (cells constantly die and regenerate)!
Split, peel, shed old meat
Red bones, dry for the first time
Lungless but gasping
Really like the last line, sort of desperately clinging to a new life. Really cool.
Thank you! I was trying to go the other way: clinging to an old life, unsure how to do the new thing
š«£ I never was great at poetry interpretation. Either way slice it, you bring struggle to the forefront really clearly in just a lines.
Molt matriculate
Root blossom where planted twin
Mitosis new twin
I love this!!
Thank you, you make it easy!
Aw, š
I really like yours, it is change on a scale that those affected could not comprehend
Haha, it was kind of a weird idea. Iām glad it worked š
Thank you! And youāre correct, humans naturally clone (cells constantly die and regenerate)!
Split, peel, shed old meat
Red bones, dry for the first time
Lungless but gasping
Really like the last line, sort of desperately clinging to a new life. Really cool.
Thank you! I was trying to go the other way: clinging to an old life, unsure how to do the new thing
š«£ I never was great at poetry interpretation. Either way slice it, you bring struggle to the forefront really clearly in just a lines.
Molt matriculate
Root blossom where planted twin
Mitosis new twin
I love this!!
Thank you, you make it easy!
Aw, š