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And sugar free!

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She happened to look

Up, the icicle broke free

A freak accident

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This was a huge childhood fear of mine. Well done!

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The perfect weapon:

Leave it in or throw it out,

The evidence melts.

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Excellent point, excellent haiku🖤

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Refreshing, hand-picked

No waiting, first come, first serve

Nature’s popsicle

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Explosion of flesh

Her white fur matted and red

Oxblood icicles

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Very gruesome, I love it!

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Blades of glinting ice

Shaken loose by plodding steps

Winter’s booby trap

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Beautiful, the word plodding made it so visual for me. I immediately saw an old wooden porch, well done🖤

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Thanks! Plodding is a heavy word, so it seemed right.

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