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JMC's avatar

when one gets real cold

the mind plays mad tricks on you

like take of your clothes

Honeygloom's avatar

I’ve heard that! Great job tying the symptom up so neatly into a haiku!

Caro Henry's avatar

Lost in frozen woods

Frostbite claims trembling fingers

Icy heart beats slow

Honeygloom's avatar

I think you really captured what an awful and slow end this would be, well done🖤