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erniet's avatar

Testing men's virtue

You bathe in starlight, tempting,

To lure those who would.

Honeygloom's avatar

Love the last line! These men are complicit in their own demise in a way🖤

erniet's avatar

Exactly!

Richbee's avatar

Unfaithful true blue

Horse’s head left on my bed

LaSiguanaba reminder Godmother knows.

Honeygloom's avatar

Hey! Always love a Godfather reference! I love the way you brought the two ideas together❤️

A.P. Murphy's avatar

¡ Infiel, macarra !

If I turn on you

as you turn on she

who loves you

your life ends this moment

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh love that whole play on turning! Well done🖤

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Going wildly blue here:

“‘I would’… if there’s wood.”

Siguanaba says “should.”

My hard head goes thud.

Honeygloom's avatar

🤭love it 🖤

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Not a haiku, but a short poem...

The talented Mrs. Ripley

She tears out unfaithful “Alien” hearts

La Siguanaba Weaver.

Honeygloom's avatar

You have reached Godmode😌 Congratulations 👽

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

I do come up with unique stuff... now I gotta go for "popular."

Honeygloom's avatar

That’s the rub, isn’t it… how to do both 🧐

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Connections…that’s really the game. Sorry to say….

Honeygloom's avatar

Guess you gotta get out there and make some then 😎

Hanna Delaney's avatar

Love love love this one!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh that’s fantastic! I love the idea that these guys are creating their own downfall, very cool🖤