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Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

Freckled fingers stretch

There, beneath the wreath hung door

Hinge pops, Dad is home

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Honeygloom's avatar

This packs so much emotion into it. Wow.

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Caro Henry's avatar

Beautiful!

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erniet's avatar

Aromas of baking

Ginger bread, spritzes, and pies

But grandma is dead!

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Honeygloom's avatar

She’s just worried about you!

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erniet's avatar

She should be!😂

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Caro Henry's avatar

Silent specters haunt

My mind as memory’s thin layers

Shatter into dust

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love this, it’s one of those I can see in my mind, but feel as well.

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Pinprick of light grows

It’s pulsating, beckoning

Drift into the past

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is trippy and disturbing, I love it.

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Caleb Taylor's avatar

I sang about life

In her special lullaby

She never got one

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Honeygloom's avatar

That is a lot of sad in a small package. Man, you know how to make an impact. Well done 🖤

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Caleb Taylor's avatar

Thank you. I love these prompts, but I see I’m a little late on this one. How do I make sure I see them?

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Honeygloom's avatar

I’m so glad you like them😌You’ll get them in your inbox if you sign up for a free subscription.

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Caleb Taylor's avatar

Great! I just thought it was a Notes thing.

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