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Carolyn Jones's avatar

Invisible ball

Slowing, stalling; tied too tight

Her demons on tow.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Nice one! Really great imagery!

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Caro Henry's avatar

It’s saprophytic

Worms and beatles feasting on

Their shackled bodies

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oooo I learned a new word and I love it!! Thank you and well done!

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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

Bound, weighted, and sunk

In the faint hope that this act

Could end it, the horror.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Never does seem to work, but still we hope. Really nicely done🖤

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Chain that melody

…around my ears, in hopes it

...will soothe my silence.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Yes!! Precisely why I love metal.

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David Perlmutter's avatar

"Chain, chain, chain/Chain of fools..."

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Honeygloom's avatar

Great song🙂

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