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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh I love the repetition of turning in lines 1 & 3. One representing life and the other death. Really cool🖤

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Thanks HG, so happy that it gets a reading like that. I try and empty my mind first so the resonant bits like that can come in. That's the way I learned to do haikus all those centuries ago ;)

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Honeygloom's avatar

What? You don’t compose them with the TV on like me?

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Ancient master say - demon picture box drives out images from spirit realm and makes you wish to eat pizza. Both things bad, one for soul, one for belly.

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Honeygloom's avatar

😂 It helps keep the ADHD part of my brain occupied while the writer part writes. I would fail so hard at any ancient esoteric way of art😅

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