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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Starlit emptiness

Our love speaks without a sound

Hearts beat in silence

.

Vacuum of space, yet

Your presence fills my being

Wordless connection

.

In the void, we float

Lips move, no whisper escapes

Love needs no echo

Honeygloom's avatar

These are beautiful and so tragic given the setting and the inevitable.

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

"Our love speaks without a sound." Absolutely beautiful... 😎

erniet's avatar

Absolute stillness

An unknown circumstance which

Would drive us all mad.

David Perlmutter's avatar

So I guess all those movies that show guns firing and explosions with sound attached in space are wrong.

Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Yeah, but pew pew guns are so fun though😜

Richbee's avatar

Star Wars comes to mind. But hear on earth.

Richbee's avatar

Laser beam signal

Light sound sent.

Deep space , heavenly bound,

Never heard from again.

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo mystery signals?

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

A mute heaven calls

In ways that cannot be heard

Save by those near sleep

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh cool take! I love this idea🖤

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

The noise in my head

Increases in volume with

More silence from you

Honeygloom's avatar

Oof, this hits hard, really well done🖤

Dylan Delgado's avatar

So quiet but still

so deafening - unfiltered

musings fill the void

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh I like this so much! You can’t escape your thoughts, not even in a vacuum🖤

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Now that you're cold, tell me what you say.

Now that you're cold and gone -

Tell. Me. Now. What. You. Say.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh man, I love this! A heart scream, just beautiful and brutal🖤

Colin Weston's avatar

Alone and afraid

Flushed out from the cargo bay

Yet I still hear you

Honeygloom's avatar

Very chilling, and intriguing, too! Sounds like a great story led up to this moment🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

It's silent, in space,

But I could still hear her heart,

Calling out to mine... 😎

James's avatar

Feel for it, for life

Listen through the straining dark

Only silence comes

Honeygloom's avatar

There is so much desperation packed into this, I really love what you did with it🖤

James's avatar

Thank you. The vacuum of space offered a deeper sense

Thea Wood's avatar

Take me home, I beg!

To whale songs, whispering winds

To life’s sweet chorus!

Honeygloom's avatar

So good! The simple things you take for granted🖤

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Aug 13, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

Apples and oranges kinda, sound waves aren’t made up of photons like light waves are and they need a medium in order to travel, like air or water, which aren’t present in a vacuum. Probably someone smarter than me can explain it better😅 But that’s the gist anyway.

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Aug 13, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

This stuff is so cool! I’m learning so much along the way.