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A.P. Murphy's avatar

So nice to get away

from the crowds, the hoi polloi -

I've got just the place in mind

Honeygloom's avatar

It does sound rather lovely… I wonder what the locals are like.

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Purple People Eaters but with impeccable manners

Honeygloom's avatar

Well everybody has to eat, you can hardly blame them.

Richbee's avatar

Super void is a sign in space race.

A detour caution to travel around

Milky Way violent explosions- implosions.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oo interesting theory! I love it!

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Supervoid yawns wide

Swallowing galaxies whole

Universe's fast

Billion light-years dance

To the tune of dark energy

Void conducts, unheard

Empty stage of space

Milky Way, reluctant star

Audience of none

Honeygloom's avatar

“Void conducts, unheard,” is such a great line! But I also love the last haiku and the image of the Milky Way just sort of dancing alone🖤

MS Rivera's avatar

I scream into space

Is there anyone out there?!

No echo. Nothing.

Honeygloom's avatar

Terrifying thought isn’t it? Not even an echo, really well done🖤

Dylan Delgado's avatar

All my words head there.

I long for someone to come;

but alas, nothing.

Honeygloom's avatar

Very deep! And totally relatable to a lot of us I’d imagine. Well done🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

A huge hole in space,

Quiet and serene, until,

The tourists find it... 😎

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

I thought I'd sneak in a little callback to one of the previous prompts. Haha... 😎

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

You say I’m empty

Yet it is you that has left me

Alone in your void

Honeygloom's avatar

Love this!! Relationships, cosmic or otherwise are so complicated🖤

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Aug 7, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

I love that the implication here is not for physical travel. Very cool vibe🖤

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Honeygloom's avatar

😂 Brilliant!

Dylan Delgado's avatar

Very clever! The void ate the poem 😂

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Haha! This is great... 😎

Richbee's avatar

Avoid the issue. Read the Times.