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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Ayhuasca Ahuizol abomination

A reeled in slippery sensation

An algae Aztecs net from boats

But surprise , devours their eyes ,

Hands down, tail, nails, teeth begone.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Wild one! Never done ayhuasca myself, but this feels appropriate🖤

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

I ‘m not sure Aztecs used either. But the monster seemed right out of hallucination.

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Honeygloom's avatar

A bad, bad hallucination😂

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Below, silence reigns

Digits sway like flowing weeds

Dream of stolen eyes

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh man🫠 That is quite an image. Well done🖤

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Ika Wright's avatar

Something new again to learn, I love it. I did not know about this! What a haunting haiku!

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Honeygloom's avatar

This was a new one for me too! I love finding new beasties!

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Nico Sakaki's avatar

The bodies are pure

Those that rise to the surface

Hollowed out, made whole

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh wow, that last line really cuts, I love the implication that what’s inside is impure somehow. Really cool🖤

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Nico Sakaki's avatar

Thanks so much! It was inspired by my favourite thing I learned about the ahuizotl, which is that after the eyes teeth and nails had been clawed out, the bodies would float to the surface. But they were considered too sacred for an ordinary person to touch, and only the priests were allowed to pull them out of the water.

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Luis A. Estable's avatar

This is a case when wanting to help is the cause of one's tragedy. Or put this way, " When curiosity killed the cat, so to speak"

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Honeygloom's avatar

Definitely how I’m going to die😅

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David Perlmutter's avatar

"Help! I'm blind and toothless with no fingernails! The Ahuizotl got me!"

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very strange fate indeed 🤔

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Honeygloom's avatar

I personally love five-handed apes so I don’t even know what you’re worried about.🤔

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Aaron McDonald's avatar

All the chain-linked fence

Is crawling with five-handed

apes. There’s no escape.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Putting you down as a “no” for the field trip.✅

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Honeygloom's avatar

But you said no thanks. If you’re going to be cryptic, I need the code.

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