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MS Rivera's avatar

Non-stop, cut, cut, cut

Flip the switch and off we go

Get out of the way!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Definitely don’t want to be in the way! Love the rhythm of this piece🖤

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erniet's avatar

Whirling steel, spinning death,

Slicing, dicing, ejecting

Grass, weeds, bugs, mice, toads...

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Honeygloom's avatar

Probably best to skip mowing, so much carnage😭 Honestly I love the chopping rhythm, very cool touch🖤

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erniet's avatar

I’ve mowed a lot…😂

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Robot rake, takes no prisoners

Dandelions devoured by steel swords

Lawn denizens cut down,

Sunshine flowers gone.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh! Such a sad little tale! I love it🖤

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Startled steel frrt frrt

Questing hand a shredded bush

Next time pull the plug

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh. Oh no. You can probably still mow the lawn with no fingers, though.

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

In my book Wind Down the Chimney and Other Eerie Tales, the cornfield takes strong objection to being harvested. Bwahaha! No reason that grass shouldn't take a similar stance against lawnmowers.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Team grass!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Its blades sounded strange,

It seemed like laughter, and then,

It moved on its own... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo, spooky!! This is a great little story-haiku🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! He's off on a killing spree, but is slightly limited by the range of his power cord! Haha... 😎

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Neighbor's mower roars

Sunday peace chopped into bits

Can't hear my own thoughts.

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Grass war rages on

Dandelions laugh with glee

Lawnmower gives up.

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New mower arrives

Promised silence, smooth as silk

Sounds like angry bees.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I feel these! I don’t have a lawn anymore, but I used to hate mowing. So much noise! Also, love the image of dandelions laughing🖤

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Even the riding ones are dangerous.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Yep. Part of why I’m anti-lawn.

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

The scent of green drool

Slobbered from rotary jaws

When blades chew on blades.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Such a great image! Glad I have no lawn to mow😬

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JP Dávila's avatar

Not again! I swear!

I cant afford to buy gas!

Fortune favors weeds!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooof right!? Definitely feel this one🖤

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Here's a spoof of S King's Lawnmower Man. Jeff Fahey for the win:

I am Lawnmower…

Man, could use a King-sized break

From all that killing

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Honeygloom's avatar

I need to read this story! You’re the second person to mention it.

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

I only watched the movie with Jeff Fahey, great actor.

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Anything that doesn't belong is technically a weed. I was just doing some weeding, and I came in to this prompt. So I plucked a few words:

These weeds sting my knees!

Water thieves! What weeds are these?

Roses. In. Cornfield!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Weeds are a very silly social construct. Probably invented by some landscaping lobby.

Frankly I think roses cropping up in a cornfield would be whimsical and fun, but I suppose a farmer might have a different opinion😜

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

They do detract from the overall look of a space, and they suck up needed moisture.

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