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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

I had never heard

The word proboscis until

You stuck yours in me

Honeygloom's avatar

Such a great word😌

David Perlmutter's avatar

A long unwelcome resident of my home province of Manitoba. The town of Komarno cemented its place by making a giant statue of one.

Honeygloom's avatar

If you can’t beat ‘em… make them your gods?

David Perlmutter's avatar

I suppose so. We have some giant sized polar bears in Winnipeg, plus a giant goose in Wawa, Ontario and a giant pysanka (Ukrainian Orthodox Easter egg) in Vegreville, Alberta, and they are all (mostly) objects of veneration...

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

West Nile Virus girl

Cleopatra's plasma twirl.

Those veins tilt and whirl...

Honeygloom's avatar

Made me dizzy just reading. Very nicely done🖤

Leigh Parrish's avatar

Just think of me as

A tiny vampire that flies!

You like vampires, right?

Honeygloom's avatar

Hmm is mosquito suggesting we make it fictional?

Richbee's avatar

Shepherds purse seeds cast

In skeeters eggs in water

Sticks the larvae together

A needle in their eyes to die.

Honeygloom's avatar

Wow that’s pretty cool🖤

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Paralysed, gazing, I lie -

tiger mosquito comes

to gorge the blood of my eye

Honeygloom's avatar

Perfect opening scene in a mosquito creature feature. I absolutely love the image🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

May I take your blood?

I just need a small amount,

But so do my friends... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

That’s the rub, isn’t it. One bite, meh, a hundred? 😵

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Yes, that's actually a real thing. Cattle and other livestock can sometimes die from multiple bites, and the loss of blood it causes... 😎

Ika Wright's avatar

This is a fiend that's been the Muse to some of my writing. Good prompt and Haiku Honeygloom. Definitely relatable!

Honeygloom's avatar

They’re oddly compelling aren’t they?

Ika Wright's avatar

They are in an annoying sort of way.

Dylan Delgado's avatar

Swatting them suckers

They carry an evil gift

Ow! Now have dengue.

Honeygloom's avatar

Scary stuff!! love “evil gift” as a description🖤

Honeygloom's avatar

Love the “blood thief’s kiss”🖤 Only you could make mosquitoes alluring!

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

In dim night whispers,

She pierces soft flesh gently—

Silent blood thief's kiss.

Wings hum their secrets,

Moon wakes her ancient hunger—

Life’s delicate dance.

Still mosquito rests,

Crimson sustenance in veins—

Eggs dream of new dawn.

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

This is doing wonders to improve the image of the mosquito. It makes them seem very sensual and romantic. Beautiful job... 😎

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Well, everybody’s got to eat. 🧛

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