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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Vagueando por el tiempo

rayos que brotan como brancas

que brotan y que podan vidas

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This one just came to me like that, in Spanish, dozing...

Translation

Wandering through time,

rays that grow like branches

that grow and that prune lives

(works better in original)

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Honeygloom's avatar

That’s beautiful! I love this image🖤

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

I love multilingual posts!

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Exposure made me

Neither Human Torch nor Thing

But I have this lump…

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Honeygloom's avatar

A far scarier symptom for sure. Reminded me of Larry and Barry in Fury Road. Well done🖤

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erniet's avatar

Earth's magnetic field,

Planetary protector.

Cosmic ray shielder.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Definitely glad we have that thing! Well done🖤

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Theresa Greene's avatar

Zombies become real

when laying out in the sun,

Cosmic rays rain down

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool! I love this idea!

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

That’s an original! Kudos

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Cosmic Radiation

Geiger counter clicked mutations

Combination unlocked.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool take! A successful adaptation?

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Word puzzle, as always. Kudos!

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

Burns like cosmic rays

Felt deep, your eyes meeting mine

Across crowded rooms

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Honeygloom's avatar

🔥Well done! Such an intriguing metaphor🖤

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

Thank you!

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Rain of life, the energy of suns.

Rain of death, bright bullets

set to shatter chromosomes

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Honeygloom's avatar

You’re on fire today! Bright bullets is a great description🖤

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David Perlmutter's avatar

"Causes DNA Mutations..." Okay- good to know that.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Don’t forget to wear your tinfoil hat😜

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Shield your rods and cones!

Radiation incoming!

Wear Cosmic Ray-Bans!

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Honeygloom's avatar

😂 Gonna be huge when we all live on Mars!

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Dylan Delgado's avatar

Fast charges slam the

upper atmosphere, giving

small glimpse into past

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Unknown particles,

Swarming like killer bees, but,

With a far worse sting... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo nice! I really like this comparison🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! 😎👍

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Another version:

Shield your rods and cones!

Be hot, look cool, put ‘em on!

Cosmic Ray-Bans, dude!

**I like this one better.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I like them both🖤

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo I love this! Well done🖤

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