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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Vagueando por el tiempo

rayos que brotan como brancas

que brotan y que podan vidas

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This one just came to me like that, in Spanish, dozing...

Translation

Wandering through time,

rays that grow like branches

that grow and that prune lives

(works better in original)

Honeygloom's avatar

That’s beautiful! I love this image🖤

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

I love multilingual posts!

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Exposure made me

Neither Human Torch nor Thing

But I have this lump…

Honeygloom's avatar

A far scarier symptom for sure. Reminded me of Larry and Barry in Fury Road. Well done🖤

erniet's avatar

Earth's magnetic field,

Planetary protector.

Cosmic ray shielder.

Honeygloom's avatar

Definitely glad we have that thing! Well done🖤

Theresa Greene's avatar

Zombies become real

when laying out in the sun,

Cosmic rays rain down

Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool! I love this idea!

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

That’s an original! Kudos

Richbee's avatar

Cosmic Radiation

Geiger counter clicked mutations

Combination unlocked.

Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool take! A successful adaptation?

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Word puzzle, as always. Kudos!

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Rain of life, the energy of suns.

Rain of death, bright bullets

set to shatter chromosomes

Honeygloom's avatar

You’re on fire today! Bright bullets is a great description🖤

David Perlmutter's avatar

"Causes DNA Mutations..." Okay- good to know that.

Honeygloom's avatar

Don’t forget to wear your tinfoil hat😜

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Shield your rods and cones!

Radiation incoming!

Wear Cosmic Ray-Bans!

Honeygloom's avatar

😂 Gonna be huge when we all live on Mars!

Dylan Delgado's avatar

Fast charges slam the

upper atmosphere, giving

small glimpse into past

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Unknown particles,

Swarming like killer bees, but,

With a far worse sting... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo nice! I really like this comparison🖤

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Another version:

Shield your rods and cones!

Be hot, look cool, put ‘em on!

Cosmic Ray-Bans, dude!

**I like this one better.

Honeygloom's avatar

I like them both🖤

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo I love this! Well done🖤

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Aug 24, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

🔥Well done! Such an intriguing metaphor🖤