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David Perlmutter's avatar

"This is the story of the Hurricane/the man the authorities came to blame..."

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Honeygloom's avatar

Great song๐Ÿ–ค

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

"He coulda been the champion of the world!" ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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Caro Henry's avatar

Fierce winds howled trees bent

Rain slashed against the grey sky

As cars floated by

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very chaotic, I love it๐Ÿ–ค

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Everything's wonderful, renewed -

wild, and amazing to the senses -

even that house now flying at my head

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Honeygloom's avatar

I really like this, the sense of wonder and terror is so perfect๐Ÿ–ค

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Thanks HG doin what I can

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Life at the centre

Defined by its absences:

Spin, wind, airborne cows.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool take, โ€œdefined by its absencesโ€ is a intriguing way of looking at the eye๐Ÿ–ค

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Richbee's avatar

The โ€˜Canes came , threw the football

Once mighty eyes of rah, rah, rah

Undefeated ibis lost feathers out of wind.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! I know nothing of sports, but you do like your Egyptians๐Ÿ˜Š

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

They say it should pass,

Miss us by miles, but if not,

Bye-bye house and car... ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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Honeygloom's avatar

Terrifying thought, that they canโ€™t really predict where theyโ€™ll go๐Ÿ˜ฌ

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

But it could be "hello insurance payment" again. Twice in three days! Haha... ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

'Round I twist and more

All 'round my wind and fury

My wrath hath no end

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Thea Wood's avatar

Whipping, whipping wind

Like a wild child spins, spins, spins

In the rain, rain, rain

โ˜”๏ธ

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Dylan Delgado's avatar

A glimmer of peace

awaits in the middle: but

destruction is nigh

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