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Nick Winney's avatar

absolutely exquisite ... intensely satisfying...and pomegranates!

it feels like it just poured out of you in one go, it just reads so...RIGHT.

this is a fez lifter if ever I read one.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you 😊 It pretty much did just kinda 🤮 out. Always appreciate when that happens 😅

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Loved it, a wonderful extravagant and wicked fantasy. Tight tight dialogue.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Dialogue is my favorite to write🖤

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

It shows. BTW quick typo catch - college not collage

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ballocks, that one gets me all the time🤦‍♀️

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

So did you see my black hole jobbie? But you can forget that if it doesn’t grab you, I got a new thing cooking and I’d love you to see it.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I haven’t had a chance to read it yet😭 I’ll have time tomorrow though. I schedule reading in for Friday, otherwise I’ll never get time.

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James Rainsford's avatar

Oooo that was great! Loved the dialog!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Keith Long's avatar

Excellent and strange

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Honeygloom's avatar

Why thank you sir☺️

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Jared Michael's avatar

So fun!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Thank you!

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