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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Tasty. Loved those last lines. Very powerful.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you so much!!

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Author Michele Bardsley's avatar

I got freaking goosebumps. Such a fantastic story!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you!!

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erniet's avatar

The Fates decide...😬

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Honeygloom's avatar

Haha😅

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Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

Great story--superb closing line!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you!

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