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Layne Mercer's avatar

Great story! I felt that I was in confident hands the whole time. I really like a story that has rules and terminology that I am unfamiliar with, but does not try to explain them all. You let me know what is going on through context instead of exposition. That makes it feel so much more authentic!

EJ Trask's avatar

fantastic! & a great, haunting pair with your last story- two sides of a coin somehow

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