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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

Push, the women said.

But there was no need-the thing

Had clawed its way out.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ow. Getting Alien vibes, which I love! Very nice!

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The Chronicler's avatar

Oooh !

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The Chronicler's avatar

Upon crested hill

Enrobe’d by crypt shadows black

Claw marks within stone

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Honeygloom's avatar

Well that is terrifying 😬 Really great image!

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you!

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

Cool one!

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you!

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erniet's avatar

Naked trees, dark skies

Asleep, fasting and dreaming

Spring! Waking hungry...

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Honeygloom's avatar

Nice! You used kireji! I never manage to make it work. Well done.

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erniet's avatar

I was inspired by your post! I went through a daily haiku phase about twenty years ago trying to do kireji and all...it's fun when you pull it off!😁

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C. Elyse's avatar

Rake neatly across

The trapezius sinks deep

Extends a claw, SCREAM

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ok I felt that one😅 Nicely done!

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C. Elyse's avatar

I am enjoying your prompts, thanks!

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