October 31 - Lucifer
Light bringer, most loved
Now banished to ever be
Corrupter of souls
Hard to imagine we need help with that. Kind of a stark reminder and retelling. I really like it🖤
Once His most favored
Black feathers stripp’d from on high
Bare feet, scarlet prints
I like this a lot, it’s almost tender. But then, you are very good at taking a hard thing and making it soft 🖤
I am?? Wow! Thank you so much! I always look forward to your poetry and prompts. Loved Joyweed btw!
I’m so glad you’re having fun and thank you 😊
Hey Mick, how about
some courtesy and respect?
Hope you guess my name.
Nice! Satan calling out Jagger!
I'm a Lucifer
Why don't you kill me, baby?
At your beck and call
A play on the light bringer? I like the take if so🖤
Yes, and also a play on Beck, the singer. From the early 90s: "I'm a loser, baby, why don't you kill me?"
His tormented soul
Sees her eyes of burning coal
Flesh ignites, consumes
Tragic love affair? It’s steeped in regret, very nice🖤
Forgetting the light
You cannot now remember
How far you fell then
Very poignant, it’s lovely. Nice work🖤
Angel heart beating
Lou Cypher, the mastermind
Creepy 80s flicks
Had to look this movie up. Looks good, always love a De Niro movie.
Yeah, still sort of holds up even today. Plays on free movie apps like Pluto and Tubi etc.
The flick you’re referring to, is a really cool trippy ‘80s flick!
So sexy she says
With lustful eyes on me
Luci shifts once again
So twisty, so steamy. Love it 🖤
Cold, the ice cuts deep
Chained to Hell's frozen abyss
Warmth, the ice gives way
Lord of dark, rise, claim bitter vengeance
Decided to 5,7,5,9 for this one!
Bold move. But I can’t imagine Lucifer sticking with the rules either, so we’ll played.😈 I like this a lot, it’s got a very epic feel.
Rules are meant to be broken! What else are they there for? Glad you like it. 😁
👍🏾
What I really love about your poems is that I’m always wrong about them. It speaks to your versatility I think. Any way, I love the last line, I can imagine it being spoken by either God or Lucifer.
Well then, I applaud for knowing what to steal and how to use it 😏
Light bringer, most loved
Now banished to ever be
Corrupter of souls
Hard to imagine we need help with that. Kind of a stark reminder and retelling. I really like it🖤
Once His most favored
Black feathers stripp’d from on high
Bare feet, scarlet prints
I like this a lot, it’s almost tender. But then, you are very good at taking a hard thing and making it soft 🖤
I am?? Wow! Thank you so much! I always look forward to your poetry and prompts. Loved Joyweed btw!
I’m so glad you’re having fun and thank you 😊
Hey Mick, how about
some courtesy and respect?
Hope you guess my name.
Nice! Satan calling out Jagger!
I'm a Lucifer
Why don't you kill me, baby?
At your beck and call
A play on the light bringer? I like the take if so🖤
Yes, and also a play on Beck, the singer. From the early 90s: "I'm a loser, baby, why don't you kill me?"
His tormented soul
Sees her eyes of burning coal
Flesh ignites, consumes
Tragic love affair? It’s steeped in regret, very nice🖤
Forgetting the light
You cannot now remember
How far you fell then
Very poignant, it’s lovely. Nice work🖤
Angel heart beating
Lou Cypher, the mastermind
Creepy 80s flicks
Had to look this movie up. Looks good, always love a De Niro movie.
Yeah, still sort of holds up even today. Plays on free movie apps like Pluto and Tubi etc.
The flick you’re referring to, is a really cool trippy ‘80s flick!
So sexy she says
With lustful eyes on me
Luci shifts once again
So twisty, so steamy. Love it 🖤
Cold, the ice cuts deep
Chained to Hell's frozen abyss
Warmth, the ice gives way
Lord of dark, rise, claim bitter vengeance
Decided to 5,7,5,9 for this one!
Bold move. But I can’t imagine Lucifer sticking with the rules either, so we’ll played.😈 I like this a lot, it’s got a very epic feel.
Rules are meant to be broken! What else are they there for? Glad you like it. 😁
👍🏾
What I really love about your poems is that I’m always wrong about them. It speaks to your versatility I think. Any way, I love the last line, I can imagine it being spoken by either God or Lucifer.
Well then, I applaud for knowing what to steal and how to use it 😏