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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

Secrets shared, tears spent,

A life built to lose in a

Moment of weakness.

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is awesome, I love the breadth of story you cover here.

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erniet's avatar

A smile, a whisper,

Supporting deeds to gain trust;

So the blade slides smooth...

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Honeygloom's avatar

The ultimate betrayal, love it🖤

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Caro Henry's avatar

Silent knife of lies

Your love coos all deceits that

Pierce my broken heart

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Honeygloom's avatar

That first line is perfect, such a great description 🖤

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Iris Shaw's avatar

Promise me, my love

when the knife is in your hand,

that I won't see it.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you!!

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