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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Bloody universe?

No, just light's tired travels

Time's relentless march

Honeygloom's avatar

A red eyed space time, I love this take🖤

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Red to redder and fast to faster,

Infraredder to ultra-ultrafaster -

universe flings itself apart

Honeygloom's avatar

🌶️Entropy

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

The further you stray

From my blinkless perspective

The hotter you look

Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! 🙌Well done🖤

erniet's avatar

Optical Doppler

Shifts perception away from

Quickly fleeing stars

Honeygloom's avatar

Nice!! What are they fleeing😬🖤

erniet's avatar

presumably the big bang!🤔

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh sure, that’s what “they” tell us😜

erniet's avatar

They tell us a lot, don’t they?😂

Just wait until my poem “Azathoth” drops in October…😁

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo I love a tease🖤

Theresa Greene's avatar

No settled color

Eyes betray us in space

Under much pressure

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo so nice!! I love the tension in this🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

It wasn't ready,

To be on display, and so,

It's gone red with shame... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

😳 Ha! Nice take, I love it🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! It's always tricky when people arrive early. It wasn't expecting to be entertaining guests yet. Haha... 😎

Richbee's avatar

Red shift worn like a mini skirt

Paint brush strokes on ‘scopes

Views are color coded scenes.

Honeygloom's avatar

Brilliant! I love the last line, so good🖤