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C. Elyse's avatar

The path is crooked

Visibly clear all can see

Scratch down find true sun

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Honeygloom's avatar

Really beautiful🖤

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C. Elyse's avatar

Thank you!

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Jon T's avatar

sunk sweet meat syrup


picking, prying and plucking


still alive—barely

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Honeygloom's avatar

Brutal! I love it!

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Jon T's avatar

what's in these sausages anyway?

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Jeff Kinnard's avatar

Prey, oblivious

Swoop, talons dig in deeply

Mother, her screams pierce

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Honeygloom's avatar

Raptor moms are truly terrifying.😱

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Rebecca J. Gomez's avatar

A shriek from the clouds

Streaks toward the ground in a flash

Talons pierce its prey

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Honeygloom's avatar

Chilling picture, and you rendered it very succinctly. I really enjoyed this🖤

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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

So sharp you don’t feel

As they slide through the gristle

Feet off the ground, gone

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Honeygloom's avatar

😅Inspiring is one word for it.

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Honeygloom's avatar

😬 silent, and sporting knife-feet. Nature’s true nightmare.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Aw, picturing a cute little fam. Very nice 😊

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Honeygloom's avatar

What is he, a chicken? Love this!

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Jon T's avatar

Torn a part Bonaparte!

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Leigh Parrish's avatar

As if the bunnies weren't bad enough!

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