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C. Elyse's avatar

The path is crooked

Visibly clear all can see

Scratch down find true sun

Jon T's avatar

sunk sweet meat syrup


picking, prying and plucking


still alive—barely

Honeygloom's avatar

Brutal! I love it!

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Oct 23, 2023
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Jon T's avatar

what's in these sausages anyway?

Jeff Kinnard's avatar

Prey, oblivious

Swoop, talons dig in deeply

Mother, her screams pierce

Honeygloom's avatar

Raptor moms are truly terrifying.😱

Rebecca J. Gomez's avatar

A shriek from the clouds

Streaks toward the ground in a flash

Talons pierce its prey

Honeygloom's avatar

Chilling picture, and you rendered it very succinctly. I really enjoyed this🖤

Daniel Baldwin's avatar

So sharp you don’t feel

As they slide through the gristle

Feet off the ground, gone

Honeygloom's avatar

😅Inspiring is one word for it.

Honeygloom's avatar

😬 silent, and sporting knife-feet. Nature’s true nightmare.

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Oct 23, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

Aw, picturing a cute little fam. Very nice 😊

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Oct 23, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

What is he, a chicken? Love this!

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Oct 23, 2023
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Jon T's avatar

Torn a part Bonaparte!

Leigh Parrish's avatar

As if the bunnies weren't bad enough!