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Richbee's avatar

Biblical monarch , no butterfly

But a whales or crocodile’s tails -tales

A state of serpentcy- emergency crushed

Leviathan levitating on an eternal scale.

Honeygloom's avatar

Love ‘a state of serpentcy’ that should definitely be a real word🖤

Richbee's avatar

You just acknowledged it. Close to autocracy but speaks with a forked tongue.

erniet's avatar

Or, alternatively...

Submerged in brine

The great beast sleeps in languor;

Leviathan waits!

Honeygloom's avatar

A two-fer!! How did I get this lucky??? Love the alternate take!

erniet's avatar

Submerged in the brine

The great beast languishes, then...

Leviathan wakes!

Honeygloom's avatar

Nice!!! I love the sudden movement! I can see it bolting to the surface.

CynthiaS's avatar

Oh leviathan

Soaring above the waves

Sea monster sublime

Honeygloom's avatar

So beautiful! I absolutely love this imagery🖤

CynthiaS's avatar

Thank you so much! I think your work is amazing!

Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you 😊

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Girl Scout cookies… yum!

Slave to savory sugar

Levia(Thin) Mints.

Honeygloom's avatar

Genius. And now I want cookies 😭

Nico Sakaki's avatar

A mind of its own

Chaos is a cunning beast

Its true form slips through

Honeygloom's avatar

The middle line is so good! I love the shapeshifting aspect, very cool!