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The Chronicler's avatar

Wet breath, gleaming eyes

Asnicker-snack! Blood on bone

Fangs in flesh, appeased

Honeygloom's avatar

Very visceral, I also love asnicker-snack so munchy crunchy!

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Oct 21, 2023
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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you! :) I love your haiku too! It’s subtle, visual, and hits the mark perfectly

Honeygloom's avatar

Getting hot in here 🔥

Daniel Baldwin's avatar

Hooked skin-whittlers

Gnash fierce in hazy starlight

Yearning for more, more

Honeygloom's avatar

Love ‘hooked skin-whittlers’ what an evocative description! Kind of forces you to stop and picture the carnage.

Daniel Baldwin's avatar

I’m gonna be honest, I started my day looking to work that phrase into something

Honeygloom's avatar

I love/hate it when that happens 😂

C. Elyse's avatar

His fangs long, black, sharp

Her claws red, curling and real

Who takes whom to bed

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Oct 21, 2023Edited
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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo kinda masochistic, I like it. 🖤

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Oct 21, 2023
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I love that this makes me think of glass fangs and a kind of dreamworld monster. Really cool!

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Oct 21, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh dear god. It has wings?! Well I have kitty litter.

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Oct 21, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

Haha, I love it!

Honeygloom's avatar

Listen, sir, I don’t mess around with toilets. That’s serious business.

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Oh no, no that’s no good, definitely something I don’t need nightmares about 😅

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Oct 21, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

Fine, then here comes me with my sledgehammer. Humph