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Jon T's avatar

Snake eye, burdock rot

Rat tail, worm juice, children’s tears

Combine with toe grease

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Honeygloom's avatar

Quite the potent potion🤢 Glad I don’t have to drink it. Very vivid imagery, really nice!

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Caro Henry's avatar

Cackles pierce the dark

As she dances through the flames

His heart in her hands

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Honeygloom's avatar

Wicked! I love it.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Absolutely love ‘vexed inside a retina’. Very cool poem!

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