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Kerry Sutherland's avatar

ignore the warning

feral thorny temptation

each bite worth the price

Honeygloom's avatar

Warning ignored, “feral thorny temptation” is so good!

Kerry Sutherland's avatar

thank you!

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Apa, recollim

mores dolçes i agres -

surt sang dels llavis

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Blackberrying is something I've only ever done with Catalan people, so it seems natural to use Catalan in this case.

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Translation:

Let's go and gather

the sweet and sour blackberries -

blood drips from our lips

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh I love this! Catalan looks so much more Latiny than other Latinate languages… at least to me, idk😅

David Perlmutter's avatar

The Isley Brothers: "The blacker the berry/the sweeter the juice."

Honeygloom's avatar

Idk, I feel like maybe they aren’t talking about fruit🤔

David Perlmutter's avatar

The song from which this came from spends a lot of time talking about them eating a lot of filched fruit as kids, but I believe you are right...

Richbee's avatar

Left berries birds will eat

Spread seeds around

Gather leaves before fall.

Tea to curb Devils revenge.

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo, are blackberry leaves good for the stomach? Or madness😜

Richbee's avatar

Diarrhea

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

The Devil’s fruits, these:

Their stains are sin, dark and sweet.

Those thorns too he claims

Honeygloom's avatar

Love the tone of this, I just had to read it aloud🖤

Theresa Greene's avatar

One red ripe berry

Remains on the bush to tempt

An unaware soul

Honeygloom's avatar

Oo such a nice visual!

erniet's avatar

With each late summer

Young hands navigate the thorns

To pluck sweet, fat fruit

Honeygloom's avatar

Love the juxtaposition of young hands and thorns, it’s subtle, very cool🖤

erniet's avatar

I spent a lot of time picking blackberries every summer as a kid; you know how they grow in California!😂

Blackberries, huckleberries, salmon berries and thimble berries...even the occasional wild strawberry!😁

Honeygloom's avatar

We have a bunch that grow on the nature preserve near us, we can’t pick them though.

erniet's avatar

Why? Do they spray them?

Honeygloom's avatar

No, the rangers there just said we can’t because it’s a preserve.

erniet's avatar

Thanks; I edited the first line, I think it flows better.

Dylan Delgado's avatar

Prickly devil fruit

not gentle to hold onto

but great throat lozenge

Honeygloom's avatar

Oo are they good for your throat? That’s so interesting, I had no idea.

Dylan Delgado's avatar

It turns the Greeks used blackberries to cure sore throats, and the Romans used them to cure various ailments.

Honeygloom's avatar

How cool! Thanks for the info😊

Mark's avatar

The ghost grandfather

Fed the boy berries

On the Eve of Samhain

Honeygloom's avatar

Oo nice! I feel like there’s a whole story here, well done!

Mark's avatar

Thank you! The Celtic feast of Samhain, on which Halloween is based, of a sort, is not a funny or childlike matter. It is the New Year, a night when the spirit and material world are almost inseparable. And it is not like the Day of the Dead. The Day of the Dead is about connecting with ancestors; Samhain is about keeping the crazy dead bastards on their side of the spirit wall

Honeygloom's avatar

Believe it or not, I am well versed in all things chthonic, behind a ghost and whatnot 😜

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

1.

Stained lips like twilight

Blackberry kisses linger

On a lover’s skin

2.

Inkwell of the woods

Quill dipped in blackberry juice

Words bloom on the page

3.

Black juice drips from palms

Painted nails of a wild girl

Crafting her own art

Honeygloom's avatar

Wow, these are absolutely beautiful🖤

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

I wanted to write something completely different yet about blackberries.

I’m so happy you like them. 😊

Honeygloom's avatar

I love them🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

We hadn't picked them,

We lied, stained with juice, and thus,

All caught red-handed... 😎

Luke Mae's avatar

I love blackberries

So cold and sweet on my tongue

Dance of joy to taste

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In no way is this spooky or spooky adjacent, and I haven't written a haiku in FOREVER but I had a great time writing this one. Thanks for sharing such fun prompts!

Honeygloom's avatar

Aw it’s lovely! And not to worry, I don’t enforce any of my own rules, lol, any poem is welcome🖤