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Nico Sakaki's avatar

I love the line "Old Thunder rages" 🖤

AND I finally caught up with the prompts!

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In death he still dreams

Man crowns himself with vengeance

Smiling as he rots

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Honeygloom's avatar

Haha, thank you! And congrats 🎉

And I love your haiku! I feel like this is exactly what he’s up to in Davey Jones’ locker🖤

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David Perlmutter's avatar

"...I stab at thee!"

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Honeygloom's avatar

Really doesn’t strike fear, does it…

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Take it all from me

Let the world burn around us

I will have your soul

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is beautifully tragic, I really love how much emotion you packed into this🖤

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David Perlmutter's avatar

You have to say it in an old timey New England accent with a Shakespearean cadence.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Haha, I… cannot😅

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

White caps wake breeches

Breaks Ahab’s peg leg

Harpoons haunt as rope ties

Tight and Moby Dick dives

Out of sight.

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Honeygloom's avatar

A chilling scene!! Really well done🖤

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erniet's avatar

Never understood

Why "Moby Dick's" considered

A classic. Boring!

😂

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ahhh!! I love it so much so far😂 I haven’t hit one of the infamous science sections yet, but hopefully soon as we’ve just left the harbor. I’m excited to see what everyone hates them so much for, lol.

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erniet's avatar

To each their own...I've known many people who just love it; I've tried at least 5 times and I just can't get through it.

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