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Across Arctic ice

Monster flees its creator

Trapped in floes and woe

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Hey, I can't find the announcement post you did but I just wanted to say, good luck. It'll be OK. Publish some haikus!!! Get your book out there. You're perfect for this job!

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Ha! Thank you so much!! I’ve definitely been thinking about it🤔

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"It's alive, It's alive! IT'S ALIVE!"

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Are you the doctor?

(Sorry to 'out' you if it's you)

I Loved the book, though...

♥️💕

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I was channeling Colin Clive (the definitive Victor Frankenstein in the 1931 movie).

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This awkward, still form

Cobbled together awaits

His cry, "It's alive!"

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Very nice! 😎

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Why should girls have fun

with babies, baby showers,

that procreation thing? -

AND NOT ME????

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Look in the mirror…

Not creator… destroyer

More monster than God

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Ooooh...I just love the

imag'ry your words bring to

my tortured minds-eye'...

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Slice and sew gathered cadavers together

Electrify with current thoughts

A live wire with brain waves of passion.

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Electrical bolts

bring(s) a flawed creature to Life...

(and seek his revenge)

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Meddling doctor

Egotistic fool with problem

Thinks he can play God

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Thank you, Clownworld for the like

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Thank you , Richard for the like

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Thank you AHAIKU4U for the like

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A mad doctor, who,

Now must turn hunter, to find,

His escaped monster... 😎

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Doctor Frankenstein

Your prideful cruel spark of life

Wakes resentful death

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The first e-human

Plug him in, watch him go…nuts

Frankenstein was “green.”

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Reanimation

The power of cheating Death

God like, yet failure

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