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Kathy Enriquez's avatar

I'm really enjoying your haikus! Makes me wanna go back and write some more on here!

Honeygloom's avatar

Go for it!! Make sure to tag me so I see them! I mostly use the app for notes and it’s hinky with notifications on older posts I’ve noticed.

Kathy Enriquez's avatar

Def will!! I do have some older ones on here somewhere. Although, I'm currently putting together a collection of them into a book along with cat drawings haha.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh that sounds amazing!! I hope you’ll let me know when it’s done!

Kathy Enriquez's avatar

Ooo I def can!! <3

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Suckling on jumpers,

A baby raised in wardrobe dark,

I grew to chase light

Honeygloom's avatar

Epic moth journey! I love this! Also love the image of baby moths sucking yarn strands. So weirdly cute.

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Silent fluttering

In moonlit urban chaos—

Moth finds its quiet.

Honeygloom's avatar

‘Moonlit urban chaos’ is such a cool phrase! It needs to be a band name or a poetry collection🖤

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Thank you. 🙏

Richbee's avatar

A hole in one, not golf;

Whole wool sweater eaten

Moth balls did no good .

Honeygloom's avatar

But a moth has a full belly, so there’s that😊

Richbee's avatar

Full belly ti heavy to fly. Stays put for the next course. Dessert.

Hanna Delaney's avatar

Noooo I hate moths 😂

Honeygloom's avatar

It’s a common fear I’ve come to realize! I’m assuming because they’re fond of flying right at your face in the dark of night? Tiny jump scare masters😂

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Hold it by the wing, throw it out

the window. A good deed, but -

what's the scent of this dark dust

on fingertips, and its wild enchantment?

Honeygloom's avatar

So cool! The places this poem can go are very enticing, really well done🖤

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Thanks HG I appreciate it

Tiffany S.'s avatar

This must be how love

Feels, an invisible string

pulling you towards light.

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo I love that! Definitely a couple interpretations which is so awesome🖤

Tiffany S.'s avatar

Thank you!

Dylan Delgado's avatar

Bane of marshmallow roasts

Yet we crave sweet treats

Worth the inconvenience?

Honeygloom's avatar

Oo I know this one! Yes!!😜 Love this, very fun and unique take🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Flight, towards the light,

Awaits us all in the end,

Enticed, just like them... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Very deep, love the connection you made there🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it... 😎

JP Dávila's avatar

Crowd around the bulb

To drink in, dizzy, the light:

The meaning of life

Honeygloom's avatar

I really love how you broke up the middle line. I had to read this aloud and it sounded so good🖤