December 6 - Keeper
They always try to
run faster, but they never
manage to get home.
The way you broke this up is genius! It’s like someone panting and out of breath, I love it 🖤
Come into my care;
I am the keeper of souls.
There is no escape.
Ooo I like the dissonance between the first and last lines, the first one is so nice and then the last is like 😱
Better late than never....
Haiku - Keepers
Jeepers creepers! Where…
…did you get such cool keepers?
My keeper is lame.
Late is absolutely better than never! I like how you broke up the first line. I started to sing the song and then was surprised with a twist. Very cool.
P.S. I could use a keeper, I am such a mess.
They always try to
run faster, but they never
manage to get home.
The way you broke this up is genius! It’s like someone panting and out of breath, I love it 🖤
Come into my care;
I am the keeper of souls.
There is no escape.
Ooo I like the dissonance between the first and last lines, the first one is so nice and then the last is like 😱
Better late than never....
Haiku - Keepers
Jeepers creepers! Where…
…did you get such cool keepers?
My keeper is lame.
Late is absolutely better than never! I like how you broke up the first line. I started to sing the song and then was surprised with a twist. Very cool.
P.S. I could use a keeper, I am such a mess.