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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Whipper-up of worlds,

Anagram of “do no rat”,

What will fall back where?

Honeygloom's avatar

This is very topsy turvy and what rat will fall where? Very lovely🖤

David Perlmutter's avatar

In the process, they may also transport people to fantasy kingdoms and shift their viewpoint from black and white to colour.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh wait my viewpoint is already color, am I on the wrong side??

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Vortex of witch-wind,

suck me out of Kansas,

though it be my death

Honeygloom's avatar

Love the term witch-wind. And the scene this sets is so cool. I just imagine some teenage witch whipping up a storm as an escape🖤

Caro Henry's avatar

Tornadic portal

Invisible hands pull souls

Worlds unseen await

Honeygloom's avatar

So scary!! Now just imagining hands grabbing me out of nowhere 😱 Really well done🖤

K.M. Bennett's avatar

A windy tail wagged

aground in forceful greeting.

A deadly meeting.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh that’s a cool image! A feral sky beast🖤

Richbee's avatar

Funnel down

Sieves shred

Lives Lost.

Honeygloom's avatar

This is short and impactful, well done🖤

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

♫ Funnel cloud, baby

Let’s do the twist(er)… and shout

Rain scurries the drought ♫

Honeygloom's avatar

Have you considered a Weird Al type career? These are so great!

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Hmm. Maybe....

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

It destroyed our town,

But did me a real favour,

I hated that car... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Hello insurance payout!

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Time for some new wheels! Haha... 😎

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Jul 28, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this, a paean to the storm🖤