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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Whipper-up of worlds,

Anagram of “do no rat”,

What will fall back where?

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is very topsy turvy and what rat will fall where? Very lovely🖤

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David Perlmutter's avatar

In the process, they may also transport people to fantasy kingdoms and shift their viewpoint from black and white to colour.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh wait my viewpoint is already color, am I on the wrong side??

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

You must be outside Dorothy's house! Huzzah! Technicolor!

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Vortex of witch-wind,

suck me out of Kansas,

though it be my death

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Honeygloom's avatar

Love the term witch-wind. And the scene this sets is so cool. I just imagine some teenage witch whipping up a storm as an escape🖤

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Oooo! Fabulous idea. Hmm... Time to get out the broomstick!

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Caro Henry's avatar

Tornadic portal

Invisible hands pull souls

Worlds unseen await

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Honeygloom's avatar

So scary!! Now just imagining hands grabbing me out of nowhere 😱 Really well done🖤

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

A windy tail wagged

aground in forceful greeting.

A deadly meeting.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh that’s a cool image! A feral sky beast🖤

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Richbee's avatar

Funnel down

Sieves shred

Lives Lost.

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is short and impactful, well done🖤

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

♫ Funnel cloud, baby

Let’s do the twist(er)… and shout

Rain scurries the drought ♫

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Honeygloom's avatar

Have you considered a Weird Al type career? These are so great!

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Hmm. Maybe....

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

It destroyed our town,

But did me a real favour,

I hated that car... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Hello insurance payout!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Time for some new wheels! Haha... 😎

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Great clouds, I await

Come lift me high for journey

Time's end is nearing

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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this, a paean to the storm🖤

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