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Kent Peterson's avatar

I'm sentimental.

I never forget a face

mounted on my wall.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Plot twist! 🫣

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Jon T's avatar

two hundred and six

all the bones in your body

laid out before me

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Honeygloom's avatar

Skeletons are so beautiful, I can almost sympathize with this narrator🖤

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Caro Henry's avatar

Did I really kill?

My blood-soaked hands tell the tale

Where’d I put that saw?

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Honeygloom's avatar

Nicely done! Good to have your tools handy!

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Miles MacNaughton's avatar

Saw cleaving through bone;

I come apart in the hands

Of my crazed lover

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo, I like this! Reminds me of Der Metzgermeister, aka the Rotenburg Cannibal.

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Okay, one more:

Forgetful zombie

Where are those tasty innards?

He can’t dismember

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Honeygloom's avatar

Poor rotten brain zombie 🧟‍♀️

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Caro Henry's avatar

Dark humor 🤭

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Tough day for you yesterday, huh? Sorry to hear. I can only offer this:

________________________________

A fire in your house

Ripping apart memories

Day to dismember

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Honeygloom's avatar

That would be a little harsh if anything had gotten ruined 🤣I do love you using dismember that way though, expressing both the violence of the act and the loss. 🖤

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Dismember=not remember.

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Iris Shaw's avatar

We’ll put your legs here

And bury your eyes northwards

Here, one lonely hand

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