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Kent Peterson's avatar

I'm sentimental.

I never forget a face

mounted on my wall.

Honeygloom's avatar

Plot twist! 🫣

Jon T's avatar

two hundred and six

all the bones in your body

laid out before me

Honeygloom's avatar

Skeletons are so beautiful, I can almost sympathize with this narrator🖤

Caro Henry's avatar

Did I really kill?

My blood-soaked hands tell the tale

Where’d I put that saw?

Honeygloom's avatar

Nicely done! Good to have your tools handy!

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Okay, one more:

Forgetful zombie

Where are those tasty innards?

He can’t dismember

Honeygloom's avatar

Poor rotten brain zombie 🧟‍♀️

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Tough day for you yesterday, huh? Sorry to hear. I can only offer this:

________________________________

A fire in your house

Ripping apart memories

Day to dismember

Honeygloom's avatar

That would be a little harsh if anything had gotten ruined 🤣I do love you using dismember that way though, expressing both the violence of the act and the loss. 🖤

Iris Shaw's avatar

We’ll put your legs here

And bury your eyes northwards

Here, one lonely hand

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo, I like this! Reminds me of Der Metzgermeister, aka the Rotenburg Cannibal.