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Caro Henry's avatar

Veins of ash and dust

Rising in a crimson dawn

Gods reclaim their throne

Honeygloom's avatar

This is epic, what a great image🖤

Tracy's avatar

Weep for those that fell

Into oblivion’s well

What new gods are these!?

Honeygloom's avatar

That’s a curious thought, did people mourn lost gods? Very thought provoking🖤

Tracy's avatar

I’m thinking not especially the folks pushing for the new gods tended to burn the proponents of the old ones at the stake and such! Ones loyal to the old ones had to go underground!

Honeygloom's avatar

It wasn’t always like that, when the old Roman pantheon was replaced by the Greek, that was gradual. I wonder how people felt then.

Tracy's avatar

Good point! Cultures overlying cultures rarely did so peacefully from most things I’ve read though. It would be interesting to see which ones and under what circumstances the ones who made peaceful transitions were able to do so- maybe it would give us all some pointers on how to navigate sweeping changes in our belief systems. Thanks for that comment, Honeygloom, now I have an interesting new research topic! 🥰🫶🏼

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Persephone, the uncle-abused

reveals her underground truth

that life is not life, death not death

Honeygloom's avatar

Life is a slow death, death is rebirth?

A.P. Murphy's avatar

That's the mystery as revealed to me at Eleusis - but I've said too much

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Gods stumble and fall,

But we keep lighting candles—

Old habits die hard.

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Laughing from the grave,

They return with the same lies—

We nod, none the wiser.

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Resurrection's cheap,

A trick they pull every year—

We're all in on it.

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Gods fall like pennies,

Yet somehow, they flip back up—

Heads, we lose again.

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We watch them tumble,

Rise from the dust, shrug, and grin—

Same show, new tickets.

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Altars grow dusty,

Yet we still clap when they rise—

It’s all for the crowd.

Honeygloom's avatar

I love this, so cynical and dark🖤

Theresa Greene's avatar

Resurrection wills

As earth and man wintered on

Christ the Lord comes soon

Honeygloom's avatar

Nicely apocalyptic, well done🖤

Richbee's avatar

Sacrificed animals entrails

Seaweed tossed onto blood 🩸

Green Snake seeds rise to replenish Earth. .

Honeygloom's avatar

It would with all that fertilizer🖤

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

“Where haven’t I been?”

She laughs as wet green shoots wrap

Grateful round one leg

Honeygloom's avatar

I love this so much🖤 I can just see this scene in my head, so good!

erniet's avatar

The first myth written...

Innanna and Dumuzi.

Goddess slays the god...

Honeygloom's avatar

Hey she felt bad later😌 😂 I love the Sumerian myths🖤

Richbee's avatar

Sacrifice for renewal…

Leigh Parrish's avatar

"Time for Spring! Awake,

Persephone! Please return!"

..."Five more minutes, Mom."

Honeygloom's avatar

Ooof, me every morning, too.🥱

erniet's avatar

😂 Teens were always the same...

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Parted from her glow,

We mourned, for nothing would grow,

Till her new life dawned... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Very lovely! Well done🖤

Jessamine Halverson's avatar

Hades welcomes you

as you toil here none shall grow

until you return.

Honeygloom's avatar

Nice!! I love this, it’s like Hades’ official met Persephone at the gates instead of him going himself. It indirectly makes him seem like a jerk, which he is. Very cool🖤

Maryann's avatar

End of spring, sadness

Now underworld dead above

Cyclical return

Again this one was a challenge! I love a challenge, however not the best lol

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh nice! From the underworld’s perspective? That’s cool🖤

Jessamine Halverson's avatar

Hades welcomes you

as you toil here crops won't grow

until you return.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Nice! There’s a whole story waiting to happen here, I love it🖤