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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

She drifts out, so far

As she can go. He watches,

Sure she'll be drawn back.

Honeygloom's avatar

Confident, as only the center of the solar system can be๐Ÿ˜Ž I love it๐Ÿ–ค

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Is it natural

To be so distant just when

Youโ€™d promised me warmth?

Honeygloom's avatar

I love where you went with this!

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

All the way out and back againโ€ฆ

A.P. Murphy's avatar

"Your orbit's gone all eggy then."

"Eggy? You mean elliptical, my Sun..."

"Sun knows what Sun knows. Watch for cracks."

Honeygloom's avatar

Sun is wiseโ€ฆ and cracks? ๐Ÿ˜…

A.P. Murphy's avatar

I see what you did there. Almost wish you hadnโ€™t.

Honeygloom's avatar

Donโ€™t worry, Iโ€™ve been ashamed of myself all day.

erniet's avatar

Aphelion knows

That the star that moils and glows

Isn't just for show

Honeygloom's avatar

Kaboom ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ˜

Richbee's avatar

A blue balloon in space

Faceless Icarus reaches zenith

Pressures on balloonโ€™s thin skin

Heat rises. Sun meltdown waxes.

Aphelion recalled implosion-explosion.

The dangling string recalled .

Gravity justified.

Honeygloom's avatar

Very interesting! I love all the movement going on here๐Ÿ–ค

erniet's avatar

Aphelion sounds

Like a Greek god's label

Or from a fable

Honeygloom's avatar

Does doesnโ€™t it? Itโ€™s one of my favorite words๐Ÿ–ค

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Farthest from the Sun,

They say you can hear Earth sigh,

Longing to be close... ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Honeygloom's avatar

I love this๐Ÿ–ค The Sun is such a babe magnet.

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Absolutely. They all want to be sun-kissed! Haha... ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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Honeygloom's avatar

So cosmically creepy, I love it๐Ÿ–ค