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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

A woman in white,

With a song in her heart, but,

Murder on her mind... 😎

Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! My kinda girl 😜

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Marriage material, for sure! Haha... 😎

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

My nut’s been done in.

Brain bubbled by midday heat,

Boiled with your questions

Honeygloom's avatar

I love all the alliteration and rhythm of this, I just had to read it aloud!

Maryann's avatar

Noonwraith, be no more

Questions - unanswerable

The madness sets in

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh I love this!! There’s a real sense of mystery to it, well done🖤

Maryann's avatar

Thank you! Such a great compliment I may be blushing 😊🖤

Richbee's avatar

Could not wait for noon.

A teaser twist with sickle spoon

Opens lunchbox to grab a bite.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh rude🤨 I love that middle line!

Theresa Greene's avatar

Trying to take a break

The noon-day sun is blinding

Quit harassing me

Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Yep this is a fair assessment! I love it!

A.P. Murphy's avatar

A noontide exam -

"The square root of -2?"

Fevered picnic dream

Honeygloom's avatar

“Hey, Siri, what’s the…” disaster averted👍

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Nightmares don't have modern conveniences... besides, this particular field has no signal like in them films.

Honeygloom's avatar

I read an article somewhere the other day about all the ridiculous contrivances horror writers/directors come up with to nullify the cell phone.

My thing is, why explain it all? It just doesn’t work is perfectly acceptable if we’re already dealing with the supernatural. Electrical disturbances and ghosts go hand in hand.

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Exactly, but the screenwriting workshops aren't going to create their own content, are they?

Honeygloom's avatar

One of the few things I remember from college writing classes is one professor who used say frequently that, “explanations are for capitalists” so I guess that turned out to be true.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo nice, a quick death 💀 Well done!

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

That's very sinister, and fantastic! 😎