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Caro Henry's avatar

Black depths seethe and churn

Sing a haunting tune; I am

Sucked under its spell

Honeygloom's avatar

I love it! So foreboding.

Jon T's avatar

waves skim dark sand beach

melancholic whispers sleep

sorrow moaning low

suff

Honeygloom's avatar

Oooo... this literally gave me the chills. Well done🖤

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

I shout from the bluff

Pointing at the distant suff

“You think you’re so tough?!”

Honeygloom's avatar

It has been really nice knowing you, I mean it. 🖤

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Is one of us going somewhere?!!!

Honeygloom's avatar

Well I’m mean after the the wind caries your taunt all the way to the Suff... 😢

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

That's a very nice comment, thank you, likewise....