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B. F. Bodhisattva's avatar

Man's best friend minus:

Time and work and love, add: fear

Recall your effect

Honeygloom's avatar

Awesome, love a little math + history inside a poem🖤

erniet's avatar

Bright red blood stains the

Altar of the lupine lord;

The pack's offering.

Honeygloom's avatar

Nice! Some arterial blood with my coffee🖤

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Today’s Grimm-y world…

Red Riding Hood canceled for:

Triggering a wolf

Honeygloom's avatar

Poor wolfey, just trying to survive…

Caleb Taylor's avatar

It wore sheep’s clothing

For the soft comfort

Because they made it feel good.

Honeygloom's avatar

*wraps self in wool blanket* yep this checks out. I love that this brought a cozy blanket to mind BUT ALSO made me think of a wolf burrowing inside a sheep carcass a la Han Solo putting Luke inside a tauntaun on Hoth.

Caleb Taylor's avatar

I love that! Cozy and a Star Wars reference. Totally nailed it! Plus I probably shouldn’t admit how many random things bring that tauntaun scene to my mind.

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Operator: Internet 911, how were you offended online today?

CWS: Uh, someone used the wrong haiku format, 5-5-7, instead of 5-7-5, in an online haiku chat group.

Operator: Is the poet armed?

CWS: Not sure, he might have a pen and possibly a bootleg version of Windows 7.

Operator: Go to your online safe space and wait for authorities to arrive.

CWS: I'll be ****posting on Instagram. DM me. Later...

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Ha ha ha. Maybe...

Honeygloom's avatar

Try petting moss. It’s weird and funny and also feels good.

Caleb Taylor's avatar

Goodness… I’ve broken form before (though it still adheres to the 17 syllable rule with two lines of 5 and one line of seven), but never have I been honored with such an elaborately outrageous drama of a response. Thank you.

Though I will say that the form change was intentional. I wanted to sort of represent the inside out take on the phrase I was playing with.