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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Summer triangle bright,

Stars stitching the night sky's quilt—

Whispers of warm light.

Honeygloom's avatar

I have to shout out the middle line, too, so beautiful🖤

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

That middle line is wonderful... 😎

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Sweating through night, slapping away

mosquitos and doubts, astronomer sights

a nebula where none should be

Honeygloom's avatar

Did you just end a poem on a cliffhanger? What’s cooking in there?😅

A.P. Murphy's avatar

Like your ghost romance story, I can't really say what's gonna happen next there!

Honeygloom's avatar

I don’t know YET…. There are no absolutes.

David Perlmutter's avatar

Altair was the name of the planet featured in the bizarre 1950s science fiction film "Forbidden Planet".

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh never seen it! I’ll have to check it out!

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Lighting up the night,

Blazing bright, but gone too soon,

Just like summer love... 😎

Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

June, July, August:

Humid heat and harvest months

Reflected in stars

Honeygloom's avatar

Oh! Nice correlation! I hadn’t even noticed🖤

Richbee's avatar

A Summer Triangle tryst

Three some twilight zone

Enter outer limits

Milky Way beyond.

Honeygloom's avatar

Oooo love this 🔥

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Jul 10, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah nice! I might have this wrong, but a comment on our tendency to see things that aren’t there?

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Jul 11, 2024
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