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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Summer triangle bright,

Stars stitching the night sky's quilt—

Whispers of warm light.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I have to shout out the middle line, too, so beautiful🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

That middle line is wonderful... 😎

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Sweating through night, slapping away

mosquitos and doubts, astronomer sights

a nebula where none should be

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Honeygloom's avatar

Did you just end a poem on a cliffhanger? What’s cooking in there?😅

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Like your ghost romance story, I can't really say what's gonna happen next there!

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Honeygloom's avatar

I don’t know YET…. There are no absolutes.

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Altair was the name of the planet featured in the bizarre 1950s science fiction film "Forbidden Planet".

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh never seen it! I’ll have to check it out!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Lighting up the night,

Blazing bright, but gone too soon,

Just like summer love... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo🔥

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! 😎👍

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

June, July, August:

Humid heat and harvest months

Reflected in stars

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh! Nice correlation! I hadn’t even noticed🖤

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Richbee's avatar

A Summer Triangle tryst

Three some twilight zone

Enter outer limits

Milky Way beyond.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oooo love this 🔥

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah nice! I might have this wrong, but a comment on our tendency to see things that aren’t there?

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah gotcha😊

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